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Multiple choice can be marked by a lookup table. The long answer — the 6, 9, 12, 16, 20 or 25-marker that decides your grade — cannot, which is why almost no revision site will touch it. You write those into a book and find out how they went in September.

On Vofti you write the answer in the app and get it back marked immediately: a number out of the marks available, and a note on the single biggest thing to fix. Every extended-response question also carries a full model answer written stage by stage, so you can put your paragraph next to the one that gets the marks and see exactly where yours stopped short.

The marker is advisory. It is a rehearsal partner, not an examiner: no exam board has seen it, no mark it returns is an official mark, and it is at its most useful for the structural faults — a missing judgement, evidence that never gets linked to the claim — rather than for the last two marks in the top band.

FrameworksMarked the way your subject is marked

There is no house style. Each subject is marked against the structure its own mark scheme rewards, and the app shows you those stage names while you write — so an English paragraph is never graded as though it were an economics one.

SubjectThe four stages
Economics & businessKnowledge · Application · Analysis · Evaluation
HistoryArgument · Evidence · Analysis · Judgement
English language & literaturePoint · Evidence · Analysis · Context & alternatives
GeographyPoint · Evidence · Explain · Assess
Psychology & sociologyPoint · Evidence · Explain · Evaluate
Religious studiesArgument · Religious teaching · Counter-argument · Conclusion
Biology, chemistry & physicsStatement · Evidence · Explanation · Conclusion
Everything elsePoint · Evidence · Reasoning · Conclusion
Worked example · A-Level Economics B · 12 marks

What follows is one model answer, written out in full so you can see what the four stages look like when they are actually done. The subject is Economics B and the framework is Knowledge · Application · Analysis · Evaluation; a history or chemistry answer would use its own stages from the table above, but the shape of the thing is the same.

ExtractUK CPI 2022 cycle

UK CPI inflation peaked at 11.1% in October 2022, the highest in 40 years. The cause was overwhelmingly imported: a doubling of wholesale gas prices following the Russian invasion of Ukraine, and a weak sterling that made dollar-priced commodities more expensive. The Bank of England's Monetary Policy Committee raised Bank Rate from 0.1% in December 2021 to 5.25% by August 2023 — its fastest tightening cycle since the early 1990s. Real GDP growth in 2023 was 0.1%.

Evaluate the case for the Bank of England's decision to raise interest rates to combat the 2022–23 inflation. (12 marks)

K · KnowledgeDefine and frame

Cost-push inflation occurs when an external shock — here, imported energy and food costs — raises firms' costs of production, shifting short-run aggregate supply (SRAS) leftward. Monetary policy is the central bank's manipulation of interest rates and money-supply conditions to influence aggregate demand. Bank Rate is the headline policy rate; raising it tightens credit conditions across the economy, dampening consumption (C) and investment (I) and so reducing AD.

A · ApplicationTo the 2022 case

In this case, the inflation is overwhelmingly cost-push: the OBR estimated that roughly three-quarters of the 2022 CPI peak came from energy and food, both supply-driven. The BoE's tool — raising Bank Rate from 0.1% to 5.25% — operates on aggregate demand. It does not address the root cause (the gas price), but it does compress AD enough to prevent the shock from passing through into wage growth and price expectations.

A · AnalysisThe chain

The mechanism runs as follows. A higher Bank Rate raises commercial lending rates and mortgage rates. Higher mortgage rates reduce disposable income for the ~30% of UK households with variable-rate or recently-refinanced mortgages, depressing consumption. Higher business borrowing rates raise the hurdle rate for investment projects, depressing I. Both reduce AD, which on a standard AD-AS diagram pulls the equilibrium price level back down toward the SRAS curve's new (higher) position — closing the inflation gap without needing the supply shock itself to reverse.

Critically, the policy also operates on expectations. If households and firms believe the central bank will act decisively, they price future inflation lower into wage demands and contracts. The MPC was explicit on this — Andrew Bailey repeatedly stressed in 2022–23 that the BoE was willing to "do what is necessary" to bring inflation back to target. That credibility is half of what monetary policy actually does.

E · EvaluationCounter and judgement

Three counter-arguments deserve weight. First, monetary policy operates with a lag of 12–18 months. By the time the BoE's hikes started biting in late 2023, the imported shock had already begun to dissipate — wholesale gas prices peaked in August 2022. The risk is that the BoE over-tightens into a disinflation that was going to happen anyway, and so creates a recession that need not have happened. The 0.1% growth print in 2023 is consistent with this read.

Second, monetary policy is a blunt instrument with distributional consequences. Higher mortgage rates fall heavily on a particular demographic (recent buyers, variable-rate borrowers) while leaving the equity-rich (older homeowners, renters whose landlords pass costs through) less exposed. Fiscal policy, with its ability to target relief, would arguably have been a better instrument — but fiscal credibility had been damaged by the Truss mini-budget, leaving the MPC the only tool with credibility intact.

Third, the supply shock itself was the right target for supply-side policy: energy market reform, strategic gas reserves, accelerated renewables build. None of this is the BoE's job, but it points to the broader case that monetary policy was acting as a substitute for absent policy elsewhere.

Judgement. On balance, the BoE's tightening was justified — not because it addressed the cause of the shock, but because the alternative was to let inflation expectations unanchor. The cost (slow growth, mortgage pain) is real but bounded. The cost of letting 11% inflation become embedded — what happened in 1973–79, when wage-price spirals took a decade to defeat — would have been larger. The right critique is not "they shouldn't have raised" but "they could have stopped earlier".

Worked example · Economics B 2.6 · reading copy only — the markable version lives in the app

There are 2339 extended-response questions across 30 subjects, each with a model answer like the one above. In the app you write yours first, then read it.